Thursday, April 15, 2010

Day Fifteen, Poem #15 - Nervous Toast

Nervous Toast
NaPoWriMo #15 – carrying a tune

radical blankets
radical clouds
natural fixations
garlands and shrouds

tinfoil butterflies
tinfoil trees
coffeepot flotsam
intimate pleas

columns of clothing
columns of ghosts
terrified bread makes
nervous toast

5 comments:

  1. Very clever ... loved "terrified bread makes nervous toast!!!"

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  2. nicely done......its the nervous toaster that makes me nervous.....thanks for sharing this

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  3. So good! I can hear/feel/see the tune!

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  4. LOL. terrified toast! love it.

    I also really like the idea of radical clouds.

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  5. Love the rhythm and 'tinfoil butterflies tin foil tree's is a delight.

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